How is my essay on the most dangerous game?

Im doing a 5 paragraph essay on the most dangerous game about the suspense and using the right format about quotes. can you please read through it and tell me how to make it GREAT. please its a if i fail or pass essay!!!!! but i only have three paragraphs please Help!!!!



The short story The Most Dangerous Game by Richard Connell is about the hunter and the hunted but later in the story it becomes ironic because it turns into a game were the hunter becomes the hunted. It turns into a chase of competition and of survival. Two sailors Rainsford and his partner Whitney sailed in to the darkness of the of sea. Their purpose was to hunt, they called it the " greatest sport". They were hunters and headed to the Amazon to hunt vicious animals such as Jaguars, and tigers. They sailed to an island called "Ship-Trap Island". Sailors feared this island and had curious dread of such a scarry place. The sky was filled with darkness when suddently he heard Three gun shots that were fired, and heard them again and again. Then he heard a scream while smoking a pipe when suddently the pipe fell and as he tried to reach for it he whent down into the sea were the waves swallowed his screams. Nobody could have heard him as the ocean swallowed his screams and the only chance of survival was to swim. Rainsford swam towards the screams and ended up in the Island. He walked on the shoreline and later found a place that looked like a mansion. There he met General Zaroff who bought the island to hunt. He was indeed a sporstman who invented a new sensation of the hunting game. His game was to train those men who's ships were wrecked and ended up in that island, and then provide them with food and a knife for three days.



Once they were trained they were led out into the island as a head start while Zaroff chase after them and tried to hunt them down. If They survived during those three days they had won the game and they were let free but in the other case if they were found they were killed. Zaroff never lost the game so if one of the men being hunted was about to survive he would release the hounds to chased after them. Rainsford rested and the next morning had a dispute with Zaroff and told him that this hunting style was to brutal. In this argument Zaroff got mad and at this point in the story Raisford became the hunted. He was let loose into the island were he was to prepare himself for the most dangerous game of his life, the survival of the fittest. The first night was panicking and worried Rainsford as he hidded on top of a tree. The next day he set up a trap but Zaroff did'nt fall for it and he almost got caught when Zaroff was right next to the bushes were Rainsford was hiding. the last day he set up a pitfall and while Zarroff and his servant were serching, his servant unfortunately fell into the pit.



Rainsford got out of the Island trying to escape by swimming out into the ocean and swam back to the mansion and when Zaroff returned Rainsford switched the game around and proposed him to become the hunted. I like this short story because Rainsford was wise in making traps wich allowed Zaroff to take more time trying to find him and did them successfully wich helped him survive those three days. I also liked how the story ended it was kind of ironic the way Rainsfored changed the game around and became the hunter and Zaroff became the hunted. I thought it was a good idea because this way Zaroff would realise that his game of hunting people was wrong and this would teach him a lesson.How is my essay on the most dangerous game?
Ok this isnt what you want to hear, but this is a terrible essay. You're writing an essay on suspense, you're NOT summarizing it. Don't put your personal opinions into it because that's not what the point of this essay is.



You should probably start with an intro which includes

- the name of the auther and book

-a BRIEF 1-2 sent summary

- and the sent. "some types of suspense are"





Then for ur body, u write and describe how that is suspense





An for the conclusion, restate ur thesis, and summarize ur ESSAY and NOT the story.



Ik u prob dont wanna rewrite this, but if its a pass/fail essay, this outline i just made u is gonna help u get at least a b
It's too much summary. You're supposed to talk about the suspense, right? Well, talk about the suspense!How is my essay on the most dangerous game?
i just read that story in my mystery and suspense english class i liked itHow is my essay on the most dangerous game?
This is not a proper essay, im sorry but you wont get a great grade with this.



Follow the format, the other answerer gave to you.



Come up with minimum 3 points from the story, explaining why this story is suspenseful, or whatever argument you are trying to prove. Then prove your points with evidence from the story. DO NOT summarize the story. These are your 3 body paragraphs.



Good luck